Update: Here's a version that I had asked to color script for me.
Hey, gang. I know there's gotta be one or 2 of ya still up, so I thought I'd give ya another sneak peek into another one of my creator owned properties called Gumshoes 4 Hire (intergalactic crimestoppers). I've roughed out 56ish panels so far, and about 12 more panels to go to wrap up chapter 1 for it.
Some of you may recognize some of the goons getting away...more will be revealed later on down the line.
Text is only temporary for your reading enjoyment. Still trying to figure out how I'm going to handle it, so pull your punches.
Looks good I just wish I could know who was talking to who better. At first it seemed like Ryan became James, I suppose. But really nice style and concept and the shot angles are nice, too. It's nice to see simple video reel format panels. They look good.