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When did it suddenly become cool to hate everything? It's a growing problem, especially in the entertainment world, and no one benefits from an increasingly hard to please, pessimistic audience.
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My ex-girlfriend has been hounding me down to design a logo for her buisness card. She is a dance major, in a community college, and teaches dance too. 15 hour days of drawing for my 4 jobs and personal projects wasn't enough for her, so she insisted I do this. We're still friends, and after dating her for 5 years I felt obligated to finish it, since I never really drew her anything. Well I did, but she hated it, and now it's a different story for some reason.
Art: Sean "Cheeks" Galloway Comments
  very fluent, very swift, very cool
-- Spelling is for losers  LOL WHEN I SOW THE MESSAGE OF DEVIANTION.. ithought : " HEHE another great peace of cheecks...
 ohhh those lines .. those colors.. let me check it.."when i sow" WHAT?!?!?!?!?!  : lol so simple. still .. a great peace of art.. but.. :S "-- im reading description!!!lol  edges? what do you mean? be more specific please. thanx
-- It's not if you can't do it; it's if you want to do it  Sorry. That *IS* pretty bad.
It's not iconic enough. It looks like an ink blot. The rounded 'limbs' look anything BUT graceful. To be honest, the first thing I though when I saw this was A Karate Kick. I do like what you tried to do here, tho. Once you look at it for a bit, the LEAPING part does come across... but not immediately. The curves are the best thing... the do convey the motion of leaping... Perhaps had you made pointier tapered limbs, simplify the form and make it more like a sail. Eliminate the background arm. It really complicates the image. Finally, was black the only color alternative? It'd really kinda heavy. If the image can be in a different, more feminine color, I think it would convey the overall idea better. Of course, it seems to me that since she couldn't wait for your work load to lighten up, I guess she got what she paid for.  -- When you do things right, people won't be sure you've done anything at all. hey! thanx for the indepth comment and crits! i'll definitely try that for future works, and i did it for free.
-- It's not if you can't do it; it's if you want to do it  *pat pat* poor child
 how bout creating a "cut" on the arm farthest from the viewer? Thus, making it more distinct as an arm...
-- I tried applying as a Sherpa, but they declined. They say I delay the climb by building snowmans and chasing around Mountain Goats when I feel the jiggy... nice suggestion, thanx!
-- It's not if you can't do it; it's if you want to do it |
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