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©2004-2009 `cheeks-74
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I put work aside to finish this message because it is important to address it.


"Will The Real Heroes Please Stand Up"


Art: Sean "Cheeks" Galloway

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:iconskruffy:
I LOVE the way you draw and color.
:iconalera:
You're my hero!

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I will fight by your side until the last drop of blood runs from my veins...
:iconzaratus:
awesome ui luv it although the baby has a grown up face haha ;)

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Francisco Ander Zárate Valadez
:iconechanone:
yo that's a great message. ture that.
glad to see someone is thinking.

:peace:
:iconennia:
Hmm...Advanced Critique Encouraged eh?

Okay, if i hadn't read what you wrote in your draft version, I might not have understood this one. However, having said that, it is a very strong concept. It just needs something else so it reads easier. If it gets published, that would probably be the logo or slogan or something of the organisation.

Isn't 'damnit' spelt 'dammit'? Or maybe that's just how we spell it here in Oz. Also, too much 'have's in the wording. Cut the last one out. --> "We shouldn't have to be the heros they look up to." Sounds better.

Hope that was useful Sean.

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"Moanday, Tearday, Wailsday, Thumpsday, Frightday, Shatterday." -James Joyce
:iconzebes:
amazing!!!
one of the best drawings you got :D

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1-Serve the public trust
2-Protect the innocent
3-Uphold the law
:iconhoshicat:
I disagree with ennia's second paragraph.

Great message.
:icony2jenn:
It's absolutely perfect the way it is. I think leaving the dialog as it is will seem more natural and will read better with people because well, lets face it... not all of us speak perfect english with correct grammar and sentence structures. ;) The colors are gorgeous as always. The baby just cracks me up. I love the poofy hair he's got on em. No crits from me. I dig everything about it. GREAT MESSAGE!

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:iconkryss:
the dripping irony here bro, is that you step up very often, and the best part is, i dont think you realize it. you get mad love and respect for that man.

peace.

K
:iconevilpencil:
I agree with ya Cheeks.
Stand up indeed...

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